Caution: Wreckage
Author: Alie
Theme challenge: Mending a Broken Heart
Things to include: “Maybe it’s time to see the world as it is.”, playground sprinklers in the middle of the night, Post-it notes
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Swearing and innuendo
Author’s Notes: Just enjoy it.
I basically completely loved this, and I can’t even pick out a favorite part because it was just all kinds of awesome. Great job.
I really liked this. I think we could all use a friend like Taylor to be both a smartass and a sweetheart to help us through our rough times. Awesome job!
I love, love, loved this. Too bad not everyone has a Taylor to come save them. My favorite part, probably, was the part with the post-its. That’s just a genius idea, and it was awesome. Great job!
I loved this! I agree with Chelsi, the post-its part was the best
Job well done Alie
I am in love with this! True honest love. I loved the way you portrayed Taylor in this. Amazing.
I agree that the post its was the best part! I also liked the sprinkler part, as I’d love to share a kiss with someone (especially Taylor) while being soaked!
This was really nice!
I liked how you chose a city for each chapter and how every city showed a step forward to mend her broke heart.
I am in love. With this story. With Taylor and Layla. With you. Marry me?
I couldn’t wait to read your piece. Your style is so different and unique and refreshing. And this was just so good. I don’t even know if I have words to really explain how I feel about it. hah
Layla and Taylor are officially my new favorite couple, and I wish there was more of them.
There are so many parts I could quote that I loved, but essentially, I’d be quoting the entire thing. The whole thing was just ingenious, and this just may be my favorite piece of TSI.
You make me a better writer.