Boston
Author: Amy
Theme challenge: Breaking Up
Things to include: “Her hair smelled like pineapple.”, a unopened letter, hammock
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Author’s Notes: This story had a lot of rewrites but I hope that it has turned out okay.
Chapter 1: Ansley
Chapter 2: Zac
Chapter 3: Ansley
Chapter 4: Zac
Chapter 5: Ansley
Chapter 6: Zac & Ansley
Chapter 7: Zac
Wow, Zac seemed to be quite the jackass in this. I don’t blame Ansley for wanting to go to Boston either. I wouldn’t want to give up my dreams for someone who wasn’t willing to give up their dreams for me.
Wow, Zac was such a hypocrite, not wanting to let Ansley put her art first when he always put his music first. Interesting take on the theme, I enjoyed it.
I liked that the breakup was so inevitable, and better for both of them, but they each had such conflicting feelings surrounding it. This was a really interesting situation.
Wow! Thanks for the comments. I didnt intend to make Zac so rude but i’m glad you all liked it. I had a blast writing this, can’t wait for the next challenge.
This story was different… since they both wanted to break up and it wasn’t just one person getting hurt. I really enjoyed it and Zac was pretty jerky but that’s also nice to see. Because we all know they arent perfect.
I like how you ended this. It’s not always the most favored situation, but sometimes it’s just for the best.
I liked this!
We could see both sides. It was good that it wasn’t only on one part but I can’t believe they never actually talked about what they wanted in 3 years.
If they really wanted to be together, they could have done it. But I guess they asked for something they couldn’t give. Zac wanted Ansley to leave her dreams but he wouldn’t his.
I liked this. I thought the very last line was great. I hated to see them end, but really, what else could they do? It obviously wasn’t working out. Job well done!
The first thing I noticed about this story was the name Ansley. I have never heard it before!..lol
I love Zac as a character, because as a person he´s a jerk. I wish we could see more of Ansley though, she intrigues me…
Great work.